It’s long now since I breathed my last
And saw my life go flashing past
No body now in which to play
I sigh, I drift, I fade away
It’s quite alright, just floating here
Compared to Earth, this is more real
While humans wonder what they are
I simply have become the stars
As everybody someday does
It always is, and always was
Yet even now there is no “me”
Somehow I’m not completely free
For still my heart’s eternal flame
Burns only for your sacred name
And lingers on, though I am through
Forever, always, just with you
Its feels like a personal chapters of your Life and thats good to start maybe when you progressing you growth the poety stylus but if iβm not wrong Oscar wilde write like that
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Thanks for your comment π Yeah it is very personal, and Iβm excited to see how it evolves as I get older and experience more!
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Can’t wait to this thank u for sharing π
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thank you for reading! β€
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Amy, As you know I lost my wife what seems like many years ago. I have often wondered about her eternal life. I believe in God and Heaven and expect that upon my passing, we will be reunited π. I wonderβ¦β¦ is she waiting somewhere for me? Your poem somehow gives me hope that she is among the stars β¨, patiently waiting for our reunion ππ. Thank You π for sharing π₯Ή
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I’m happy to know my poem inspired a feeling of hope for you Danny β€ I wrote it when I was in a silly, romantic mood and it doesn't really line up with my personal beliefs…but anything is possible, right? π
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Nice poem.Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you!
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