In the dream my brother tells me Love is All
A revelation unfolds in my chest
A memory made new clothed in his voice
We are crossing a river that carves
Through a honey-colored canyon
Of striated sun-drenched stone
A black goat stands in the shallows and watches
As I gather up the layers of my flowing garments
And step carefully through flowing water
That is crystal clear showing every glittering yellow pebble
Ahead of me my younger sister has let her long pants
Drag in the water and I watch it soak its way upwards
There are flat red porous stones floating on the surface
Caught behind a curve in the canyon wall
We have made it to the other side and are gathered
In a small ravine looking back across the water
In the direction from which we have come
The black goat startles and disappears into the scrub
And my brother is going to dive
I raise my camera and press record
We are gathered on the bank as he leaps
His body parts the water with a splash
Arcs of glass rising from either side of his torso
The water is too shallow and he rises spluttering
He is not hurt and we are all glad
To have witnessed his courage
the tag says healing, so i imagine the scene of your brother rising from the water could be equated to a sort of baptism? its a dream though, so anything’s possible. nice poem!
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Ooh cool, I hadn’t even thought of that symbolism! But I love it. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a beautiful poem and I like all the detail
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Thanks for reading Don!
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I love the depth of your writing that goes beyond what you actually want to say.
Everything in centered about love!
Excellent!!! 🙌🏽
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Thank you Angello! I love that you’re picking up on the unsaid parts of this one.
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It paints such a lovely picture 💜
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Thank you Brian 🙂
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